Learning Goal: I’m working on a english multi-part question and need the explanation and answer to help me learn.
Introduction – You’r introduction is missing. – you need to write your thesis at the end of your introduction. Organization You still have some very big problems with organization. Each paragraph needs to be about ONE topic only. The topic for each body paragraph needs to match only ONE reason in your thesis statement. Every piece of evidence needs to be connected back to that topic. Counterargument You still don’t have a clear counterargument and refutation paragraph. Your counterargument paragraph needs to start with the opposite argument to your thesis. Then you need to show why that argument is weak. Don’t repeat previous arguments. Address the counterargument specifically. References – Start the references at the top of the page. – Use a hanging indent – put references in alphabetical order – all references must match in-text citations