Type of Essay: Revisions Strategies

Writing Instructions:

Evaluate the writing sample that follows. Write a Revision Strategies Essay where you will:

Evaluate and address the strengths and weaknesses

Examine whether, in its context, the sample succeeds in its purpose

Determine the pattern of mistakes in grammar, punctuation, spelling, usage, etc.

Give examples of these errors from the sample

Address any problems that the writer needs to take into account in the revision