. Changes to your formal analysis: how you improved your description of observations, used more specific details, vocabulary, or correct spelling and grammar.
. Changes to the interpretation of your formal analysis: how well you demonstrate the significance and possible interpretation of what you’ve observed
. Contextual analysis: how much thought you put into considering your future research.
What do you want to learn more about?
What do you hope it might show about the artwork?
How reasonable are your research questions
