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By now you have received feedback on your Paper 1 plan and should be getting ready to begin your , or already started. For this assignment you will apply concepts from (paragraph structure) to revise at least two paragraphs from your Introduction.

  1. Start by writing out your Introduction using your Paper 1 Planning Document.
  2. Then, select two paragraphs that you could improve (note: all paragraphs can be improved so this step is up to you!). You should turn in both a copy of your original paragraphs as well as the revised version of your paragraphs.
  3. Lastly, include 2-3 sentences describing what you have changed and how you think it will help the overall “flow”, structure, or clarity of your Introduction.