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Work on sharpening your thesis statement. What are these “wise recommendations”? Are you ultimately arguing for a blended approach?

Based on the “needs and specifications of the users,” which is ultimately better?

Next, remember to provide some context for the sources you are quoting. Who are these authors and where have you found that information?

What context or background do we need to know about to understand their claims?